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Can you please correct grammar?

-->Our flight has been cancelled so I was wondering if we could postpone our stay at the hotel even though it's non refundable.
-->Follow the tire trace of the car in front when it snows.
-->It doesn't feel like we are in LA because of the snow.
-->I don't drive the same way in the snow that /as I do when it isn't snowing/doesn't snow.
-->Be happy that I'm living with you or else you would feel lonely.
-->Go through/Use the passenger door. You can't open the driver side.
-->The line was long but it was fast. We only waited 10 minutes.
-->Looks fade but charm stays. I'd rather have charm than be beautiful.
-->I traveled throughout/within Asia.
-->You can only get forecast up to week in advance. From Monday to Monday. If you want to see the following Tuesday's you need to wait till Tuesday
-->This is the shortest flight I've taken.

Thank you in advance