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Namsteven Posted 16 years ago
Grammar

Experience is plentiful

- When you're a student and when you have a large amount of money you should invest it in studying. You will open your own business until your knowledge is solid and your experience is plentiful. You can invest your money by buying land with basic prices and then sell them with higher price, however the level of risk is extremely high.

- Are these ok to say?

Thanks very much to Teachers,

Namsteven
  

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' This paragraph is loaded with them. Students who have a large amount of money should invest it in education. The time to open one's own business is when knowledge is solid and experience is plentiful.

— Ed_shaw

  • ' This paragraph is loaded with them.
  • Students who have a large amount of money should invest it in education.
  • The time to open one's own business is when knowledge is solid and experience is plentiful.
  • One extremely high risk business for investors is buying and selling land.
  • Hope this is some help.
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I rarely approve the indefinite 'you.' This paragraph is loaded with them.

Students who have a large amount of money should invest it in education.
The time to open one's own business is when knowledge is solid and
experience is plentiful. One extremely high risk business for investors
is buying and selling land.

Hope this is some help.
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