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Anonymous Posted 19 years ago
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expectation

Hi there,

Can you proofread the following sentence?

Parents in Asian countries usually have expectations of thier children than those in western countries do.

Pete
  

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Hi Pete, Parents in Asian countries usually have expectations of thier children than those in western countries do. Parents in Asian countries usually have greater expectations of their children than parents in Western countries do. Better is - Parents in Asian countries usually have greater expectations of their children than do parents in Western countries.

  • Hi Pete, Parents in Asian countries usually have expectations of thier children than those in western countries do.
  • Parents in Asian countries usually have greater expectations of their children than parents in Western countries do.
  • Better is - Parents in Asian countries usually have greater expectations of their children than do parents in Western countries.
  • Best wishes, Clive
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Hi Pete,

Parents in Asian countries usually have expectations of thier children than those in western countries do.

Parents in Asian countries usually have greater expectations of their children than parents in Western countries do.

Better is -

Parents in Asian countries usually have greater expectations of their children than do

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