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Tuongvan Posted 18 years ago
Grammar

expand connections

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001/In class I often raised my hand and give my own ideas whenever the teacher raised a question.02br
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002/I actively expand connections/relationships ,thereby having more friends.02br
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003/We should expand relationships with neighbouring countries.02br
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00Thank you in advance0-
  

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02font 02b 02br 00 whenever means every time the teacher asked a question - so often in the first part of the sentence doesn't sit well. 12blockquote 11font 01b 00I actively seek to widen my circle of friends02b 02font 0-

— Optilang

  • 02font 02b 02br 00 whenever means every time the teacher asked a question - so often in the first part of the sentence doesn't sit well.
  • 12blockquote 11font 01b 00I actively seek to widen my circle of friends02b 02font 0-
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01cite10Tuongvan12cite10In class I often raised my hand and give my own ideas whenever the teacher raised a question.12blockquote
11b01font00In class I often raised my hand and gave/put forward my own ideas when01del00ever 02del00the teacher asked a questio
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0Thank you optilang, so I will say :01b01font00I actively seek to widen my circle of friends02font02b00 ,thereby having more friends02br
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00Best wishes0-
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01cite10Tuongvan12cite11b11font10I actively seek to widen my circle of friends12font12b10 ,11font10thereby having more12font10 11font10friends12font12blockquote
10I think the p
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