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On the first day at a new school, students focus on getting to know their new classmates and teachers. Also, they like to explore the school facilities and walking around in the school campus. I think students would like to spend the first of school talking about their holiday and what they did during it instead of taking lessons.
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Here's another version for your comparison. On the first day at a new school, students focus on getting to know their new classmates and teachers. They like to explore the school facilities and walk around the campus.
- Here's another version for your comparison.
- On the first day at a new school, students focus on getting to know their new classmates and teachers.
- They like to explore the school facilities and walk around the campus.
- I think students would rather spend their first day talking about what they did during their holiday instead of taking lessons.
- CJ
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Here's another version for your comparison.
On the first day at a new school, students focus on getting to know their new classmates and teachers. They like to explore the school facilities and walk around the campus. I think students would rather spend their first day talking about what they did during their holiday instead of taking lessons.
CJ
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