Please help me correct the following paragraph. Thanks!
In Chiayi, an elementary school female teacher wrote an op-ed / letter to the United Daily News, exclaiming:We always give the child the best, but do not care that he has no concept of compassionate.
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In Chiayi, an elementary school teacher wrote an op-ed letter to the United Daily News, exclaiming:We always give the child the best, but do not care that he has no concept of compassionate.
So, I rewrite the sentence as written. Is it acceptable?
In Chiayi, an elementary school teacher wrote an op-ed letter to the United Daily News, exclaiming:We always give the child the best, but do not care that he has no concept of compassionate.
In Chiayi, an elementary school teacher wrote an op-ed letter to the United Daily News, exclaiming, "We always give the child the best, but we do not care if he has no concept of compassion."
In Chiayi, an elementary school teacher wrote an op-ed letter to the United Daily News, exclaiming, "We always give the child the best, but we do not care if he has no concept of compassion."
I don't know whether the word 'exclaiming' here is acceptable. The teacher wanted to correct the deviant attitude. Should it be replaced by the word 'criticizing'?
contiluoThe teacher wanted to correct the deviant attitude
Then this would be clearer:
In Chiayi, an elementary school teacher wrote an op-ed letter to the United Daily News, complaining, "We always give the child the best, but we do not seem to care if he has no concept of compassion."