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Contiluo Posted 13 years ago
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exchange day

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A few days ago, there was a school exchange day between Zhao-Dong Elementary School and Qing-Shui Elementary School. The students of Qing-Shui to be guests by visiting Zhao-Dong, which welcomed the visiting guests by drum dance and leicha (grounding tea) teaching. Besides, the host also prepared the game of “crawling through the ladder” to let both schools students revive the game of semi-century ago, experience the fun of crawling through the ladder.
  

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A few days ago, there was a school exchange day between Zhao-Dong Elementary School and Qing-Shui Elementary School. The students of Qing-Shui were guests of Zhao-Dong, who welcomed them with a drum dance and leicha (tea-grinding) lesson. The hosts also prepared the game of “crawling through the ladder” to help the students revive the 50-year-old game and experience the fun of crawling through a ladder.

  • A few days ago, there was a school exchange day between Zhao-Dong Elementary School and Qing-Shui Elementary School.
  • The students of Qing-Shui were guests of Zhao-Dong, who welcomed them with a drum dance and leicha (tea-grinding) lesson.
  • The hosts also prepared the game of “crawling through the ladder” to help the students revive the 50-year-old game and experience the fun of crawling through a ladder.
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A few days ago, there was a school exchange day between Zhao-Dong Elementary School and Qing-Shui Elementary School. The students of Qing-Shui were guests of Zhao-Dong, who welcomed them with a drum dance and leicha (tea-grinding) lesson. The hosts also prepared the game of “crawling through the ladder” to help the students revive the 50-year-old game and experience the fun of crawling through

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