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Ed73 Posted 22 years ago
Letter Writing
Excerpt of Letter
Hi
Here's an excerpt of my letter.
Before
Pursant to Article x.*** Final Completion and Final Payment of the General Conditions of Contract, I hereby certify that the following amount is due to you for final payment on the abovenamed project.
After
I certify that the/this amount is payable to you for final payment on the above project as requested under Article x.*** Final Completion and Final Payment of the General Conditions of Contract:
Does the latter read better?
Advocate of plain english.
Here's an excerpt of my letter.
Before
Pursant to Article x.*** Final Completion and Final Payment of the General Conditions of Contract, I hereby certify that the following amount is due to you for final payment on the abovenamed project.
After
I certify that the/this amount is payable to you for final payment on the above project as requested under Article x.*** Final Completion and Final Payment of the General Conditions of Contract:
Does the latter read better?
Advocate of plain english.
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*** Final Completion and Final Payment of the General Conditions of Contract: Read better? Yes. *** is payable to you as final payment according to the contract for Project X.
- *** Final Completion and Final Payment of the General Conditions of Contract: Read better?
- Yes.
- *** is payable to you as final payment according to the contract for Project X.
- MountainHiker
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I certify that the/this amount is payable to you for final payment on the above project as requested under Article x.*** Final Completion and Final Payment of the General Conditions of Contract:
Read better? Yes. (I think you want to end with a period "....Conditions of Contract.")
If it were me,
$X.*** is payable to you as final payment according to th
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