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HifaMo Posted 12 years ago
Grammar

examples of participating in the game

please is the following phrase correct?

Examples of Participating in the Game

At first, it was "Examples of My Participation in the Game," but I changed it to avoid using 'my'.

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At first glance, "Examples of My Participation in the Game" seems better and clearer to me, but more context might be useful. )

  • At first glance, "Examples of My Participation in the Game" seems better and clearer to me, but more context might be useful.
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At first glance, "Examples of My Participation in the Game" seems better and clearer to me, but more context might be useful.

(That's assuming you do actually mean "My", of course...)
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I hope to see other views.

Thank you
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HifaMoI hope to see other views
And I hope to see more context.
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Ok

Let assume that I participated in a national event, and I'm required to write a report about my participation in the event to an institution.

One of the heading of the rapport is about examples of my participation in the national event.

Should it be:

Examples of My participation in the Event (name, for example)

or

Examples of participatin
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HifaMoExamples of My participation in the Event (name, for example)
I don't quite understand what you mean by "name, for example", but, ignoring that, this one is better and clearer in my opinion. You need to capitalise "Participation" too.

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