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Anonymous Posted 21 years ago
Letter Writing
Exactitude in the description
Thank you for the correction of the last letter.
There is only one little thing that I would like to ditinguish in the letter: I have been several times fellow and, separately, I have got five awards in researching. I think it is not correctly expressed in the correction, as it mixes both. Could you please propose another sentence (-s) that would show it clearly?
At the letter I wrote: My research work has been financially supported by various research fellowships and five times awarded.
At the correction it was written: Various research fellowships have financially supported my work five times.
Thank you again for your help,
Centralita
There is only one little thing that I would like to ditinguish in the letter: I have been several times fellow and, separately, I have got five awards in researching. I think it is not correctly expressed in the correction, as it mixes both. Could you please propose another sentence (-s) that would show it clearly?
At the letter I wrote: My research work has been financially supported by various research fellowships and five times awarded.
At the correction it was written: Various research fellowships have financially supported my work five times.
Thank you again for your help,
Centralita
Top answer
I have achieved research fellowships several times and I have won five awards for my research.
- I have achieved research fellowships several times and I have won five awards for my research.
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I have achieved research fellowships several times and I have won five awards for my research.
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