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JuliaKKKKKK Posted 13 years ago
Letter Writing
EVS MOTIVATION LETTER
Helloo:
Could someone help me and correct my EVS letter? Grammar and many more:) deadline is in 2 days.... THANK YOU!
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My name is Julia I’m 19 years and I live in Poland. I learn rural tourism in --- and Acting in ---. With this letter I would like to apply for the participation as a volunteer in ----- project. After reading the profile of your organization and project-based EVS I knew immediately that I would like to be a part of it. Problems affecting the isolated village from the big resorts like ----- are known to me. . I come from a small isolated village so I know this from experience - lack of activities and projects such as yours which led to to stop of the development despite the incredible tourist attractiveness. Underrated cultural goods deteriorate and die tourist-rich areas without relevant activities
I believe that the problem of emigration of young people to larger centers is troubling for the whole community. Young educated and creative people are the only way for the development of the region. Paying attention to this problem and prevention are an amazing idea
I am very open and willing to cooperate. Interested in tourism and Art. I divide my time between the two schools makes a lot of fun and allows me to grow in many ways. I am a person with high organizational skills, I like work in a team. I am a very charismatic so headed for the performing arts that reflected the daily life of many helpful features, such as creativity, entertainer skills, communication skills and knowledge of the Cinema and theater that I gladly share. I believe that EVS is a brilliant idea because the best way to develop and learn is to get to know new people and cultures. Changing the environment to live, work among the foreign culture is something that helps to shape the young people much more than books and theoretical knowledge. Maybe not much more but definitely in a different way ?. I've always been involved in many charitable social action - mainly for dogs and horses. In the stud I have taken care of young people, we were doing typical rural activities and I taught them about care of the horses. I am a very active - sport is my second life. I grew up in the mountains, so I love the outdoor activity, I am also a equestrian and swimmer . I have very positive attitude to life. I love meeting new people, experiencing new things
Your project makes me very interested and I think it'd be the perfect person.. I am a big fan of traditional values and traditional cultures so I understand why it is so important for you to spice up the area and protect it from oblivion and destruction. I am in contact with environment since I was little - my father is an environmentalist. I accompanied him in the execution of projects - more related to wildlife and Animals but it taught me to respect nature in general.The Territorial Laboratory actvities are interesting because I’m susceptible to ecology itself, I try to be organic every day as well as support activities that help to protect the environment - it helps me to sleep better at night ? Attracting young people, cultural events such as mentioned Literature and Books activities in Library are great idea for such a Art Geek like me. Because of my interests and abilities could bring a lot to the activities at the commune.. Activities for the protection of landscape and monuments in Sardinia, makes me want to find out more and take part in them. On my initiative I would offer assistance for the development of tourism and cultural activities. Maybe I could draw youth on theater and cinema?
Personally, I look forward to the development of myself, the way of looking at the world, expand mine mind. I would like to meet new people, learn humility. The work on the development of rural tourism is directly related to my education. Volunteering wold gave me a lot of practice and I could learn a lot of useful things in the profession. If you would choose me as an volunteer I would take a language course.
Hope you will consider my application positive - our cooperation would be productive, I think I could bring a lot of positive energy to your project ?
Could someone help me and correct my EVS letter? Grammar and many more:) deadline is in 2 days.... THANK YOU!
Dear
My name is Julia I’m 19 years and I live in Poland. I learn rural tourism in --- and Acting in ---. With this letter I would like to apply for the participation as a volunteer in ----- project. After reading the profile of your organization and project-based EVS I knew immediately that I would like to be a part of it. Problems affecting the isolated village from the big resorts like ----- are known to me. . I come from a small isolated village so I know this from experience - lack of activities and projects such as yours which led to to stop of the development despite the incredible tourist attractiveness. Underrated cultural goods deteriorate and die tourist-rich areas without relevant activities
I believe that the problem of emigration of young people to larger centers is troubling for the whole community. Young educated and creative people are the only way for the development of the region. Paying attention to this problem and prevention are an amazing idea
I am very open and willing to cooperate. Interested in tourism and Art. I divide my time between the two schools makes a lot of fun and allows me to grow in many ways. I am a person with high organizational skills, I like work in a team. I am a very charismatic so headed for the performing arts that reflected the daily life of many helpful features, such as creativity, entertainer skills, communication skills and knowledge of the Cinema and theater that I gladly share. I believe that EVS is a brilliant idea because the best way to develop and learn is to get to know new people and cultures. Changing the environment to live, work among the foreign culture is something that helps to shape the young people much more than books and theoretical knowledge. Maybe not much more but definitely in a different way ?. I've always been involved in many charitable social action - mainly for dogs and horses. In the stud I have taken care of young people, we were doing typical rural activities and I taught them about care of the horses. I am a very active - sport is my second life. I grew up in the mountains, so I love the outdoor activity, I am also a equestrian and swimmer . I have very positive attitude to life. I love meeting new people, experiencing new things
Your project makes me very interested and I think it'd be the perfect person.. I am a big fan of traditional values and traditional cultures so I understand why it is so important for you to spice up the area and protect it from oblivion and destruction. I am in contact with environment since I was little - my father is an environmentalist. I accompanied him in the execution of projects - more related to wildlife and Animals but it taught me to respect nature in general.The Territorial Laboratory actvities are interesting because I’m susceptible to ecology itself, I try to be organic every day as well as support activities that help to protect the environment - it helps me to sleep better at night ? Attracting young people, cultural events such as mentioned Literature and Books activities in Library are great idea for such a Art Geek like me. Because of my interests and abilities could bring a lot to the activities at the commune.. Activities for the protection of landscape and monuments in Sardinia, makes me want to find out more and take part in them. On my initiative I would offer assistance for the development of tourism and cultural activities. Maybe I could draw youth on theater and cinema?
Personally, I look forward to the development of myself, the way of looking at the world, expand mine mind. I would like to meet new people, learn humility. The work on the development of rural tourism is directly related to my education. Volunteering wold gave me a lot of practice and I could learn a lot of useful things in the profession. If you would choose me as an volunteer I would take a language course.
Hope you will consider my application positive - our cooperation would be productive, I think I could bring a lot of positive energy to your project ?
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