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Everyone should stay at school until 18

Having considered both views, I believe that knowledge gained from schools could be beneficial but it is not the only way to achieve success.
Many people hold the view that everyone should stay at school until they are 18. While I agree that going to school is the way that can gain more benefits, I believe that it is not a mandatory choice either.
On the one hand, staying at school until age 18 can help us reap lots of advantages. We can get a wealth of knowledge and skills until we graduated. It is also a long preparation for the university path to be able to choose the right job in the future. Due to the competitive society so it is not strange that those who have a degree from high school and the university will have better chances to work in a good company with a high salary cause can access the educational institution. Furthermore, schools also provide moral education and help teenagers can distinguish between good and bad.
On the other hand, going to school is not necessary for some children because if some students want to be a chef, they may find better training from a cooking class or many youngsters choose a career that does not require them to continue studying at school past the age of 18. Additionally, for some families with difficult circumstances, this will put pressure on their budgets and they need their children to go to work early to reduce their burdens and make ends meet.
Having considered both views, I believe that knowledge gained from schools could be beneficial but it is not the only way to achieve success.

  

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