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Subash2008 Posted 13 years ago
Grammar

Eventhough

Dear Teachers, Could you please check the below sentence for correction?

My life story ends on a single line, eventhough my life going with fast pace without comma and fullstop,
  

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Dear Teachers, Could you please check the below sentence below for correction s ? My life story ends on a single line, eventhough my life going with fast pace without comma and fullstop, I don't understand the sentence. What are you trying to say?

  • Dear Teachers, Could you please check the below sentence below for correction s ?
  • My life story ends on a single line, eventhough my life going with fast pace without comma and fullstop, I don't understand the sentence.
  • What are you trying to say?
  • "even though" and "full stop" are two words.
  • You need a full verb in the clause beginning with "even though" "comma" needs an article.
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Dear Teachers, Could you please check the below sentence below for corrections? My life story ends on a single line, eventhough my life going with fast pace without comma and fullstop,

I don't understand the sentence. What are you trying to say?

"even though" and "full stop" are two words.
You need a full verb in the clause beginning with "even
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Thank you AS. What I mean.is,

My life is going with a busy schedule everyday. There is no break or pause in-between. But If I describe my life, Its end in a sentence.

How I Join these sentences?

Thank you. I appreciate your time.

Subash.S
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OK. Subash;

This is a good description of someone with a very hectic daily life:
I have a very busy schedule, with hardly any time for a break.

Now you want a sentence that tells about the end of your life? That is, when you die?
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I can correct your original and preserve the punctuation references, Subash, but I cannot guarantee it says what you mean:

My life story ends in a single sentence, going at a fast pace without any commas until the full stop.
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Mister MicawberI can correct your original and preserve the punctuation references, Subash, but I cannot guarantee it says what you mean:My life story ends in a single sentence, going at a fast pace without any commas until the full stop.
An epitaph, perhaps.

My life, expressed as a sentence, has no commas, no pauses, running on at a mad pace up to t
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Thank you dear Teachers, AS and MM.

Your contributions made my sentence absolutely beautiful.
I wish my epitaph should be, ' I expressed my life fully, thought freely, loved unconditionally, lived sincerely. Now I am here, listening to silence, lying on the lap of mother Earth, where I came from'.
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subash2008I wish my epitaph should be,
If I had selected the one below, I would have thrown grammar to the wind and deleted all the commas.

My life, expressed as a sentence, has no commas, no pauses, running on at a mad pace up to the inevitable full stop.

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