Even more/more so
Are both these sentences correct:
a) "This is beautiful: both the statue and even more its symbolism."
b) "This is beautiful: both the statue and more so its symbolism."
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Christine Christie Are both these sentences correct: I would add commas. "Even more" and "even more so" are both fine here, but they are parenthetical. If you do not set them off with commas, you lose the required parallelism for "both".
- Christine Christie Are both these sentences correct: I would add commas.
- "Even more" and "even more so" are both fine here, but they are parenthetical.
- If you do not set them off with commas, you lose the required parallelism for "both".
- Also, the colon should be reserved for dry, technical writing.
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Christine ChristieAre both these sentences correct:
I would add commas. "Even more" and "even more so" are both fine here, but they are parenthetical. If you do not set them off with commas, you lose the required parallelism for "both". Also, the colon should be reserved for dry, technical writing.
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