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Anonymous Posted 4 years ago
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Even more so

Hi, I'm wondering whether 'even more so' is used correctly in this sentence. Thank you!

A lot of people are fascinated by the supposedly ecstatic experiences provided by psychoactive substances, even more so due to the fact that they are illegal.

  

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anonymous I'm wondering whether 'even more so' is used correctly in this sentence. Yes, but two things. The illegality makes them more fascinated?

  • anonymous I'm wondering whether 'even more so' is used correctly in this sentence.
  • Yes, but two things.
  • The illegality makes them more fascinated?
  • That is a dubious claim.
  • And "even more so due to the fact that" sounds like you're getting paid by the word.
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anonymousI'm wondering whether 'even more so' is used correctly in this sentence.

Yes, but two things. The illegality makes them more fascinated? That is a dubious claim. And "even more so due to the fact that" sounds like you're getting paid by the word. Try "even more so because they are illegal."

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