Hey,
Kindly evaluate my SOP & Personal Statement for my MS CS application for NYU. Any help or feedback would be appreciated.
SOP {link removed}
Personal Statement {link removed}
If this is good, I'll use it as the backbone for other universities. Please be mindful that English is not my native language, so there may be some grammatical mistakes.
Regards,
Piyush
It would be better for you to post the text of your documents here, in your actual post. That makes it easier for us to edit them, and also allows other learners to learn from the comments that are made. But note that long documents are less likely to receive comments, because they are very time-consuming for us.
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It would be better for you to post the text of your documents here, in your actual post. That makes it easier for us to edit them, and also allows other learners to learn from the comments that are made.
But note that long documents are less likely to receive comments, because they are very time-consuming for us.
Hi Piyush,
Please post the text directly to the forum post. Do not provide external links to it.
Also, if these are two different documents, make a separate thread for each.