Evaluating proposal (FCE)

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01b01font00Your school has recently been given a large sum of money to spend on either a new library or a cafeteria. You have been asked to write a report for your school director, describing the advantages of each plan. Say which one you think should be chosen, and why. 02font02b02br
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00To: Mr. White02br
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00From: Peter Petrov02br
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00Date: 16 June 200702br
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00Subject: New facility: Library or Cafeteria? 02br
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00Introduction02br
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00The purpose of this report is to recommend which facility would be most beneficial to the school.02br
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00Benefits of a library02br
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00This would offer the following advantages: 02br
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1. 00It would enable all students to borrow a variety of books from the library and would help them do homework.02li
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2. 00 Authors, writers, journalists could be invited to the library to discus different topics with the students.02li
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3. 00Meetings, clubs and other activities could be held in the library02li
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00Benefits of a cafeteria02br
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00This would provide the following benefits:02br
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1. 00The students could have meal in the school instead of leaving for other places to eat.02li
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2. 00A variety of food and beverages could be served during all terms.02li
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3. 00It would also provide more job opportunities for some students, as they could be employed as temporary staff.02li
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00 Conclusion/Recommendation02br
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00Although the cafeteria could offer some benefits, a large amount of money would require to provide it with all the necessary supplies. Furthermore, visitors of the cafeteria would make a lot of noise, which would not be acceptable due to its close location to classrooms. In my opinion, the school should build a new library, because it would make books freely available for the students, and meetings with interesting people would appeal to them. 0-