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Evaluating places (FCE)

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01font01b00A group of foreign tourist is going to spend a holiday in your town. You have been asked to write a report for the group leader about eating out during their stay. Describe the best place for tourists to eat and drink in your area. Say what kind of food is available, and explain why you think this place would be suitable for tourists. 02b02font02br
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00To: Mr. White02br
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00From: Peter Petrov 02br
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00Date: 16 June 200702br
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00Subject: Eating out – The Old Mill02br
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01b00Introduction02b02br
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00 The purpose of this report is to give information about the best place for tourists to eat out. 02br
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01b00General information02b02br
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00 The Old Mill is a traditional Russian restaurant with live folk music, which is situated in the old center of town, approximately 15 minutes from your hotel, and can be easily reached by public transport. It is open daily from 8.00 to midnight. 02br
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01b00Food02b02br
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00 There are more than 30 traditional Russian dishes on the menu, including the well-known ones such as: 02br
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00Kotlety po-kievski – baked breast of chicken stuffed with butter sauce. 02br
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00Bliny with dark grey caviar02br
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00 Soft and strong drinks02br
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01b00Suitability for tourists02b02br
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00 - Many of the staff speak a second language.02br
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00- Credit cards are accepted02br
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01b00Positive points02b02br
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00 - Can be reached by public transport easily 02br
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00- A wide variety of food would appeal to the tourists02br
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00- Entertainment is available 02br
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01b00Negative pints02b02br
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00 - Prices in general are quite high 02br
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00- It is overcrowded, especially on weekends 02br
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00 In spite of the disadvantaged, I would recommend The Old Mill for your group. 0-
  

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1font 01b 00I’ve reviewed my report more carefully and found some mistakes. Could you please check the corrected version of my report and BTW where are you who can help me? Please check this.

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1font01b00I’ve reviewed my report more carefully and found some mistakes. Could you please check the corrected version of my report and BTW where are you who can help me? Please check this. Thank you. 05002b02font02br
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00To: Mr. White02br
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00From: Peter Petrov 02br
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