Evaluate my Motivation Letter

[Note: The following text is my own self-created original text. - Simeon Vasilev]
Dear Madam or Sir,

As many other international first-year students, I was quite anxious and worried when I first came to country XXX to start studying in University XXX. Initially, I had troubles attuning to the new environment and education system, I lacked the necessary practical and study skills. Fortunately, the mentor programme eased my transition from secondary school to university life, helping me form new skills and adapt to the different setting. Being a second-year student, I would like to return the favour and make student life more enjoyable for other newcomers.

I believe that the mentor programme will enable both first-year students and myself, to improve our communication and personal skills. I expect to increase my social circle and meet interesting people from different cultures, as well as develop leadership skills by successfully managing a group. In addition, providing guidance on the required topics is another way to reinforce my own skills and knowledge on the subject(s). Furthermore, I can gain valuable insight from the programme supervisors. By being a mentor and actively contributing to the University community, I hope to gain a sense of usefulness, fulfillment, and personal growth.

I reckon I am a suitable candidate since I can easily relate to new students' discomforts and challenges. During the academic year, I have learned new skills, which helped me steadily improve my grades throughout the blocks. I gain fulfilment from being useful and helping the local community. Recently, I volunteered for the University XXX Charity Days by assisting at a refugee center and interacting with disabled kids. Also, I translate online educational material, such as TED Talks and Khan Academy videos. I have good communication skills and am able to maintain cultural sensitivity and socialize with members of diverse groups.

Yours faithfully,
John XXX