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Moguwai007 Posted 12 years ago
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European movies

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When I watch European movies, everything looks very exotic, including people, food, buildings, cars, and tone of conversation.Contrarily, I wonder if tourists from Europe in Japan find everything here exotic as well.
  

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Hi again Moguwai! I made some suggestions for improvement below:) When I watch European movies, everything looks very exotic, including the people, food, buildings, cars, and tone of the conversation s . Similarly , I wonder if tourists from Europe in Japan find everything here exotic as well.

  • Hi again Moguwai!
  • I made some suggestions for improvement below:) When I watch European movies, everything looks very exotic, including the people, food, buildings, cars, and tone of the conversation s .
  • Similarly , I wonder if tourists from Europe in Japan find everything here exotic as well.
  • ).
  • Hope that helps!
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Hi again Moguwai! I made some suggestions for improvement below:)

When I watch European movies, everything looks very exotic, including the people, food, buildings, cars, and tone of the conversations. Similarly, I wonder if tourists from Europe i
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Thank you very much for your reply, What I mean by "tone of the conversations" is the way they talk, in the sense that e.g. Japanese tend to speak calmly while European seem to speak emotionally. In that sense, is " tone of the conversations" appropriate?
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It's fine in my opinion to describe tone in this way:)

When I mentioned Japanese tone, I mean this:
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Japanese_pitch_accent

So my understanding could be wrong, but I believe that Japanese tone indicates how to say a word so to give the correct meaning?

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