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New2grammar Posted 18 years ago
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establishments

Terrorists, not able to strike the US on its soil, are targeting US [buildings/establishments] outside the US around the world.

1. Are there any mistakes?
2. Which choice is correct?
Thanks.
  

Top answer

g. "US government buildings"; then delete either "outside the US" or "around the world", as only one is necessary (I would keep the latter). Best wishes, MrP

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  • "US government buildings"; then delete either "outside the US" or "around the world", as only one is necessary (I would keep the latter).
  • Best wishes, MrP
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Hello N2,

It would probably be more idiomatic to say "on its own soil"; I would prefer "buildings" to establishments, but with a qualifier, e.g. "US government buildings"; then delete either "outside the US" or "around the world", as only one is necessary (I would keep the latter).

Best wishes,

MrP
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New2grammarTerrorists, not able to strike the US on its soil, are targeting US [buildings/establishments] outside the US around the world.

1. Are there any mistakes?
2. Which choice is correct?
Thanks.

I concur with MrPedantic's suggestions and offer an additional one. In this context at least, I think it's more idiomatic to say "unab
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Thanks RayH.

Thanks, Mr P. I haven't seen you around for a couple of months, maybe? Welcome back Emotion: smile

Terrorists, un
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New2grammarTerrorists, unable to strike the US on its own soil, are targeting US government buildings outside the US.

Does the bolded phrase sound like terrorists' home countries? I wanted to say US soil instead.
It's fine the way it is. No one reading this would mistake your meaning.
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New2grammarI haven't seen you around for a couple of months, maybe? Welcome back Emotion: smile
Thanks,

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