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Liv_vil Posted 16 years ago
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Hi guys heres my essay, i translated it from Chinese.
please correct my mistake. Thanks
Most of Chines Folk Festivals are basis of four seasons-Spring, Summer, Autumn, Winter. In order to meet this vigour and vitality season, “Spring Festval” had came into being. The Spring Festival of Han nationailty is the Lunar Chinese new year, which has 3000 years history.
Spring Festival is the holiday, which has the largest scale and it lasts the longest time of China’s folks festivals.
For thougsands of years, as the Lunar years ended and a new year began, people who worked hard all year worshipped their gods and ancestors, celebrating the year’s harvest and praying for good weather for the ensuing year, bring prosperity to both man and animals.
When the twelfth month of the lunar year come, the family started to get busy for preparing the upcoming celebrations around the Spring Festival.
The 23rd day of the last lunar month is an annual worshipping kitchen Day, this is the major festival in the five ancient festivals. The kitchen god has great authority to control every family’s houseworks, and it is said that, when he returns to heaven, the speech he has made will determine one family’s coming fortune and misfortune.
New years eve is on 30th day of the last lunar month, people started get busy since they got up, displaying spring couplets, changing door gods, hanging New Year pictures, and pasting paper cut arts.
please correct my mistake. Thanks
Most of Chines Folk Festivals are basis of four seasons-Spring, Summer, Autumn, Winter. In order to meet this vigour and vitality season, “Spring Festval” had came into being. The Spring Festival of Han nationailty is the Lunar Chinese new year, which has 3000 years history.
Spring Festival is the holiday, which has the largest scale and it lasts the longest time of China’s folks festivals.
For thougsands of years, as the Lunar years ended and a new year began, people who worked hard all year worshipped their gods and ancestors, celebrating the year’s harvest and praying for good weather for the ensuing year, bring prosperity to both man and animals.
When the twelfth month of the lunar year come, the family started to get busy for preparing the upcoming celebrations around the Spring Festival.
The 23rd day of the last lunar month is an annual worshipping kitchen Day, this is the major festival in the five ancient festivals. The kitchen god has great authority to control every family’s houseworks, and it is said that, when he returns to heaven, the speech he has made will determine one family’s coming fortune and misfortune.
New years eve is on 30th day of the last lunar month, people started get busy since they got up, displaying spring couplets, changing door gods, hanging New Year pictures, and pasting paper cut arts.
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First, please go through your translation and check the spellings and capitalizations. Then re-post and I will point out your other errors.
- First, please go through your translation and check the spellings and capitalizations.
- Then re-post and I will point out your other errors.
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First, please go through your translation and check the spellings and capitalizations. Then re-post and I will point out your other errors.
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Most of Chines folk festivals are basis of four seasons-spring, summer, autumn, winter. In order to meet this vigour and vitality season, "Spring Festval" had came into being. The Spring Festival of Han nationailty is the lunar Chinese New Year, which has 3000 years history.
Spring Festival is the holiday, which has the largest scale and it lasts the longest time of China's folks festiva
Spring Festival is the holiday, which has the largest scale and it lasts the longest time of China's folks festiva
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Try again, and more carefully this time-- you've spelt Chinese and festival 2 ways in just your first paragraph.
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Most of Chinese folk festivals are basis of four seasons-spring, summer, autumn, winter. In order to meet this vigour and vitality season, "Spring Festival" had came into being. The Spring Festival of Han nationailty is the lunar Chinese New Year, which has 3000 years history.
Spring Festival is the holiday, which has the largest scale and it lasts the longest time of China's folks festi
Spring Festival is the holiday, which has the largest scale and it lasts the longest time of China's folks festi
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Good. Now I have underlined most of the problem areas. See if you can fix these:
Most of Chinese folk festivals are basis of four seasons-spring, summer, autumn, winter. In order to meet this vigour and vitality season, "Spring Festival" had came into being. The Spring Festival of Han nationailty is the lunar Chine
Most of Chinese folk festivals are basis of four seasons-spring, summer, autumn, winter. In order to meet this vigour and vitality season, "Spring Festival" had came into being. The Spring Festival of Han nationailty is the lunar Chine
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Most China's folk festivals are based on four seasons-spring, summer, autumn, winter. To celebrate the season of vitality and rebirth, Spring Festival came into being. the lunar Chinese New Year is Han's Spring Festival which has 3000 year history.
Spring Festival is the holiday which has the largest scale and it lasts the longest time of China's
Spring Festival is the holiday which has the largest scale and it lasts the longest time of China's
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You did well. OK, my turn:
Most of China's folk festivals are based on the four seasons. To celebrate the season of vitality and rebirth, the Spring Festival came into being. The Chinese lunar New Year is the occasion of the Han Spring Festival, which has a 3000-year history. The Spring Fest
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OK-- I give up! I can't fix the strange formatting mistake in the middle, livvil, sorry. I hope you can understand my meaning! If not, please ask me.
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spring couplets are pasted on each side of the door and propitious words across the lintel at the top. not exactly poetry.
Thank you so much Mister Micawber!!!
Thank you so much Mister Micawber!!!
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Let me try once more. Here it is, unformatted:
You did well. OK, my turn:
Most of China's folk festivals are based on the four seasons. To celebrate the season of vitality and rebirth, the Spring Festival came into being. The Chinese lunar New Year is the occasion of the Han Spring Festival , which has a 3000-year history. The Spring Festival is China's longest a
You did well. OK, my turn:
Most of China's folk festivals are based on the four seasons. To celebrate the season of vitality and rebirth, the Spring Festival came into being. The Chinese lunar New Year is the occasion of the Han Spring Festival , which has a 3000-year history. The Spring Festival is China's longest a
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