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Anonymous Posted 12 years ago
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Guys, can you help me to improve my essays? I'm applying to a international transfer student program, and I have to submit a series of texts. The first one is a research topic:
Research Topics: In a short essay of no more than 100 words, please discuss research topics you would like to pursue if given the opportunity while studying in the U.S. –Please provide a brief explanation of topics that interest you and research projects that you would be interested in participating in while in the U.S. Try to be as specific as possible.
I would like to participate in artificial inteligence and machine learning reseaches. In long term I want to apply my knowledge in data mining for biomedical informaticas, so a study in any related area is welcomed. I have most interest in neural networks, genetic algorithms and pattern recognition. About these topics, I would be glad about any research with biological and medical approach, where I can have the oportunity to get in touch with the introduction bioinformatics, help others researches and use it in the near future. If possible, I would like to write a scientific paper about the subject
Research Topics: In a short essay of no more than 100 words, please discuss research topics you would like to pursue if given the opportunity while studying in the U.S. –Please provide a brief explanation of topics that interest you and research projects that you would be interested in participating in while in the U.S. Try to be as specific as possible.
I would like to participate in artificial inteligence and machine learning reseaches. In long term I want to apply my knowledge in data mining for biomedical informaticas, so a study in any related area is welcomed. I have most interest in neural networks, genetic algorithms and pattern recognition. About these topics, I would be glad about any research with biological and medical approach, where I can have the oportunity to get in touch with the introduction bioinformatics, help others researches and use it in the near future. If possible, I would like to write a scientific paper about the subject
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Anonymous Try to be as specific as possible. You have not been very specific. These topics are extremely general.
- Anonymous Try to be as specific as possible.
- You have not been very specific.
- These topics are extremely general.
- I have highlighted some areas that need attention, and put some corrections, questions and remarks in your text.
- I would like to participate in artificial inteligence and machine learning reseaches .
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AnonymousTry to be as specific as possible.You have not been very specific. These topics are extremely general. I have highlighted some areas that need attention, and put some corrections, questions and remarks in your text.
I would like to participate in artificial inteligence and machine learning
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