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0 I have a phobia of writing. I have put off my English classes in college until the very end. Now they are inevitable! 02 br
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00 So now I need to write an essay and I have no clue as to where to start? Can anyone give useful tips on a thesis statement? 02 br
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00 My Essay is arguing for the presence of discriminitoray harassment polices on college campuses. I wrote that: 02 br
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00 I believe that discriminatory harassment policies should be present on college campuses because: 00 02 br
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00 Now I heard that a thesis needs to describe the whole essay and it can be fairly long. I was thinking of saying something like 02 br
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00 Discriminatory harassment policies should be present on college campuses because the ensure the safety of students on campus and they promote equality on campus. 02 br
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00 Tell me what you think? Thank you for all your help! 0-
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00 So now I need to write an essay and I have no clue as to where to start? Can anyone give useful tips on a thesis statement? 02 br
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00 My Essay is arguing for the presence of discriminitoray harassment polices on college campuses. I wrote that: 02 br
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00 I believe that discriminatory harassment policies should be present on college campuses because: 00 02 br
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00 Now I heard that a thesis needs to describe the whole essay and it can be fairly long. I was thinking of saying something like 02 br
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00 Discriminatory harassment policies should be present on college campuses because the ensure the safety of students on campus and they promote equality on campus. 02 br
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00 Tell me what you think? Thank you for all your help! 0-
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0 Hi, 02 br
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00 Here's a small initial comment. 02 br
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00 Consider your terms. 'A harassment policy' sounds like a policy that is in favour of harassment, just like a 'safety policy' favours safety, 02 br
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00 Instead, speak of 'an anti-harassment policy' or 'a policy against harassment'. 02 br
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00 Best wishes, Cli
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00 Here's a small initial comment. 02 br
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00 Consider your terms. 'A harassment policy' sounds like a policy that is in favour of harassment, just like a 'safety policy' favours safety, 02 br
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00 Instead, speak of 'an anti-harassment policy' or 'a policy against harassment'. 02 br
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00 Best wishes, Cli
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