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Anonymous Posted 12 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
Essay writing
I have an essay title on You are what you eat: To what extent does diet affect health and wellbeing? I have written an introduction I need help in developing the plan and make sure the points are clear. Please could you help. See below my essay plan. Please give feedback on how I can improve. It is 800 words.
Background information Thesis statement / aims Structure of essay / main points
Over many years, Food has been a number one factor in the world. Humans consume amount of calories each day. People tend to go for the easier option – takeaway foods which we suffer the consequence due to bad health. We tend to go for foods that interest us rather seeking the foods that are nutritious and are healthy. What extent can diet affect your health and wellbeing?
Diet can affect your health and wellbeing if you make the wise choices and look at what you eat.
This essay will explore the importance of healthy diet and its benefits to the body. I will discuss further how nutrition can affect the mind and body. What people can do, eat or think to promote good health. The influences of different gender – women and men in their nutritional choices towards food. Theories that support eating a healthy diet consisting the five food groups plus fruit and vegetables can reduce illnesses
Influences of the easier option of going cheap - poor nutrition vs good nutrition
What foods you eat determine your lifestyle and life expectancy
How nutrition affect your mind and body when you have decided that you want to be healthy.
Topic sentences/references sections:
What you eat can affect your health and wellbeing: Healthy diet and physical activity can reduce symptoms of what?
Living better can result to reduce health failures article Look at what you eat can determine your choices.
Good nutrition is the best option in maintain a healthy life. Too general
BMA journal Studies have shown that good nutrition and some form of physical activity is the best option in maintain a healthy life. You are guaranteed to live longer and risk of illnesses.
Influences of genders – women and men’s attitudes towards food how is that related to your thesis statement?
Influence of culture – diet : people might stick to something that is convenient Emerald Snight journal Women and men have different ways in choosing their nutritional. It stated that men would not go for vegetarianism.
Educated and influence of making wise choices due to diets. Nutritionmd.org – how diet affect your health? Healthy natural foods vs chemically food in the supermarkets – what the media portrays to do.
Conclusion
Healthy diet can affect your health and wellbeing in preventing
Background information Thesis statement / aims Structure of essay / main points
Over many years, Food has been a number one factor in the world. Humans consume amount of calories each day. People tend to go for the easier option – takeaway foods which we suffer the consequence due to bad health. We tend to go for foods that interest us rather seeking the foods that are nutritious and are healthy. What extent can diet affect your health and wellbeing?
Diet can affect your health and wellbeing if you make the wise choices and look at what you eat.
This essay will explore the importance of healthy diet and its benefits to the body. I will discuss further how nutrition can affect the mind and body. What people can do, eat or think to promote good health. The influences of different gender – women and men in their nutritional choices towards food. Theories that support eating a healthy diet consisting the five food groups plus fruit and vegetables can reduce illnesses
Influences of the easier option of going cheap - poor nutrition vs good nutrition
What foods you eat determine your lifestyle and life expectancy
How nutrition affect your mind and body when you have decided that you want to be healthy.
Topic sentences/references sections:
What you eat can affect your health and wellbeing: Healthy diet and physical activity can reduce symptoms of what?
Living better can result to reduce health failures article Look at what you eat can determine your choices.
Good nutrition is the best option in maintain a healthy life. Too general
BMA journal Studies have shown that good nutrition and some form of physical activity is the best option in maintain a healthy life. You are guaranteed to live longer and risk of illnesses.
Influences of genders – women and men’s attitudes towards food how is that related to your thesis statement?
Influence of culture – diet : people might stick to something that is convenient Emerald Snight journal Women and men have different ways in choosing their nutritional. It stated that men would not go for vegetarianism.
Educated and influence of making wise choices due to diets. Nutritionmd.org – how diet affect your health? Healthy natural foods vs chemically food in the supermarkets – what the media portrays to do.
Conclusion
Healthy diet can affect your health and wellbeing in preventing
Top answer
You have a good outline. Most writers do not do as well as you have done. But I would avoid generalizations.
- You have a good outline.
- Most writers do not do as well as you have done.
- But I would avoid generalizations.
- Your first sentences can be improved because they are very confusing to the reader.
- There has never been a time that food was not important - for all living things.
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You have a good outline. Most writers do not do as well as you have done.
But I would avoid generalizations. Your first sentences can be improved because they are very confusing to the reader. There has never been a time that food was not important - for all living things. And, except for people who are voluntarily refusing to eat (eg protesters in prisons), everyone eats and consumes fo
But I would avoid generalizations. Your first sentences can be improved because they are very confusing to the reader. There has never been a time that food was not important - for all living things. And, except for people who are voluntarily refusing to eat (eg protesters in prisons), everyone eats and consumes fo
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