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Essay topics: The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main...

The following line graph illustrate the variation in ownership of electrical applicances and number of hours spending for household chores in one nation between 1920 and 2019.

Overall, the usage of eletrical appliance has increased over a century while the amount of time that people spent to do house works has reduce dramatically. At the start of the period, washing machine was the most popular spread, but it was replaced by vacuum cleaner from 200 to 2019.

With regard to the popular of washing machine, it began at 40 percent and then reached over 70 percent after experience a fluctuated period. In the contrary, the rate of using refrigerator started at 0, but then rapidly peaked 100 percent in 1980 , and still remained the same in the next 39 years. Likewise, the percentage of utilazing vacuum cleaner was 30 percent at the beginning, yet it showed moderate increase until reached 100 percentin and continuelly stay at 100 percent until 2019.

On the order hand, people gradually spent less times in doing house works per week. From 1920, the amount of times are hit the peak at 50 hours, but after that it significantly lessen 40 hours in 2019.


  

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