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Modern red 239 Posted 6 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

Essay to show myself

Every scene around us, whether big or small, wide or narrow, has its meanings for each person. As a nature lover, the sense of wallowing in the earth’s space, the impressive beauty that nature given upon humans fascinated me. The two pictures that I sent to the admissions committee are very special to me. For me, I had a wonderful summer vacation with my family, and even more fortunate to have caught the opportunity to witness such a beautiful sunrise scene. The two photos contain my dreams, ambitions, and aspirations about what I want to contribute to Vinuni and the community. The wave originating from the river flowing into the sea is the beginning of a journey of searching and creating myself. It wants to discover new things and conquer dreams, ambitions. That wave carries the courage, desire and determination to overcome all adversities to achieve the set goals. The vast sea is the entire world of knowledge, a gathering place for talented people, a place to create conditions and opportunities for their talents to shine. And Vinuni is the vast sea that I talk about. Only when the waves reach out to the great sea, they can swing and show their full potential. When the wave reaches the enormous sea, it means it will have to strive more to survive in the middle of the sea. I consider myself a wave from the river trying to reach out to the enormous sea, towards a new sky with so many challenges awaiting. Is it that talents from the time of birth have or have to go through difficulties and hardships to become talents? I believe that not everyone is born intelligent, has outstanding, most people have to go through the days of self-training to awaken infinite talent in themselves. The image of the sun rising, dispelling the darkness to start a new day, is an image of faith and vitality in a brighter future. That belief is the prerequisite factor motivating me to reach out further, struggle in the sea of ??knowledge that I believe I will be where I belong. With the desire to dedicate myself to change my life, my family, and my society, I believe that I am the factor that Vinuni is looking for to train for the country. Although born not at the finish line, it is never too late to start from an imperfect starting point to a winner. And if we have perseverance, effort, passion and faith, we will succeed.

  

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This is not an essay, but a very long paragraph. An essay must be divided into paragraphs. Typically, it has an introduction, conclusion and two or more body paragraphs.

  • This is not an essay, but a very long paragraph.
  • An essay must be divided into paragraphs.
  • Typically, it has an introduction, conclusion and two or more body paragraphs.
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This is not an essay, but a very long paragraph. An essay must be divided into paragraphs. Typically, it has an introduction, conclusion and two or more body paragraphs.

When you post text here, please include the instructions.

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Every scene around us, whether they are cityscapes, landscapes or seascapes, big or small, wide or narrow, (Those are not good collocations for "scene.) has its meanings for each person. As a nature lover, the sense of wallowing (wrong word. ) in the earth’s space, the impressive beauty that nature

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