Essay proofread....

Hello everyone:

I've been reading lots of posts throughout this site and was wandering if you could help me out to improve my short essays. It's just that i currently live into a spanish-speaking country and find writing essays a good way to practise my english....

Although i haven't asked for permission, i'll keep posting here my essays to keep learning from my mistakes. At the end of the day, i guess that's what this site is meant for...

Thanks in advance...
Hugo

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I definitely find vacations as the greater times in our lives…

Whenever it’s possible I’m planning to go on vacations whether they are long or short term. Going on vacations lets you free your mind, spend some time along your family, eat food you rarely do, have some beers, all in all, escape from the routine. Nevertheless, if you want to enjoy them thoroughly you’d better invest some time setting them up.

For instance, last vacations my family and me planned to spend three days in Borburata, which is a bay placed in Carabobo State. We were going to arrive to a room that suited just for eleven folks. Therefore, my aunt, sister, brother, mother, nephew, niece, wife, and me were invited by my mummy and daddy. At last, there were two beds free since my brother-in-law and my cousin missed out on the party…

We didn’t want to waste time preparing food over there due to this two leading reasons: we were a lot of people, and consequently we would had wasted at least three hours a day cooking. Thus, we agreed the following: I was assigned to prepare some sauce to eat pasta on Saturday, my sister was supposed to prepare rice, my aunt took care of the breakfasts and my mother of the dinners. That way all of us could had had fun on our three-day vacation.

In brief, I’d suggest anyone who wants to plan some vacations to distribute the chores so that everybody be able to have as much fun as possible.