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Kamarbajwa Posted 15 years ago
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Essay on dowry system

There are many evil in our society. the doery system is one of them. it has become a problem today. almost every family has a girl. so every family has to suffer sooner or later. an india girl not like western girl. she can not choose her husband for herself. her marriage means business.

The history of the dowry system is old. the son has a share in the parent poperty. the daughter should also get her share. but we gave her present at the time of the marriage. but the meaning of the dowry has been changed today. one of the worst part of this dowry system is that if a girl bring less dowry she is haressedin her inlaw family .

To settle the girl`s marriage is another problem. the girl father face all kind of insult. he is ask to spent more and more .the girl birth in the family is sad news. it is all because of dawry

To conclud that the younger boys and girls come forward all eradicated this social evil the government should implemented some strick rules toward dowry system
  

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I have underlined some problem areas. Please try to fix them and post your revised essay. Start by capitalizing the first word of each sentence, as I have done.

  • I have underlined some problem areas.
  • Please try to fix them and post your revised essay.
  • Start by capitalizing the first word of each sentence, as I have done.
  • There are many evil in our society.
  • the doery system is one of them.
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I have underlined some problem areas. Please try to fix them and post your revised essay. Start by capitalizing the first word of each sentence, as I have done.

There are many evil in our society. the doery system is one of them. it has become a problem today. almost every family has a girl. so every family has to suffer sooner or later. an i

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