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AmberRena Posted 11 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

Essay Needs Correcting

I know that I have some flaws and I am not quite sure how to correct them. Anyone like to help me out? The link should take you to the document.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1XupqFBT1o1Ym2PvccdFVsoIx7g8lHUI46SxF_5IZYW4/edit?usp=sharing
  

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AmberRena The link should take you to the document. It does, but it does not allow us to comment, only to view. If you want feedback on particular sentences or phrases, post them in this thread.

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  • AmberRena The link should take you to the document.
  • It does, but it does not allow us to comment, only to view.
  • If you want feedback on particular sentences or phrases, post them in this thread.
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AmberRenaThe link should take you to the document.
It does, but it does not allow us to comment, only to view.
If you want feedback on particular sentences or phrases, post them in this thread.
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AmberRenaThis one should allow you to comment.
It's not using my EnglishForward userid, but a private Google account. I won't comment there.
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