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Dear Sir:

I would like to introduce myself as a candidate seeking placement in the Master of Business Administration in Hotel and Tourism Management at . My name is xxxxx and I am from . I believe I am a self-motivated and hard working individual capable of taking on challenging assignments. I consistently look for opportunities to try new things and learn.



I have a Bachelor Degree in Business Administration of Marketing from . After graduation and worked in real estate and import-export businesses, I returned to school late last year to improve my English language skills at Cambridge School of Languages in . Upon completion of this English course, I hope to begin studying in the hotel and tourism field in . Although Singapore is not terribly far from my home country, it is very different from . During the time living and studying in has been an excellent experience for me and also has helped prepare me to live and study abroad.



Although, most of my educational background and prior work experience has been in other fields, I have been interested in the hotel and tourism field for quite a long time. I followed with interest the steady growth in the hotel and tourism industry worldwide and saw the local benefits and career opportunities firsthand in my country. Recently, I made the decision that if I ever was ever going to pursue my dream of working in this field then I should start it now. I do believe that Cesar Ritz Colleges Switzerland will give me the education and training that I need to realize my dream.



The reason that I wanted to study in based on recommendations from friends and colleagues and because the country has an excellent reputation in the hotel and tourism field. I chose because I believe the school is highly qualified and can offer me a unique learning experience that will develop my potential and enhance other key personal skills essential to my future career.



After completing Master Degree of Business Administration in Hotel and Tourism Management at , I am considering going back to my country to further my career. I believe that I would like to begin my career by working in one of the large hotels in . I am most familiar with the excellent opportunities in ’s growing tourism industry, so that is my first choice. However, I also recognize that after studying at I will learn of opportunities in other countries and I will be open to pursuing those opportunities as well.



I am a person who loves to cook and I especially love to cook for other people. As a result, my dream has always been to own my own restaurant where I can prepare and present my own dishes. I really believe that placement at will be a perfect opportunity for me to learn and develop the knowledge and skills that will be necessary for me to realize my dream.



Thank you very much for considering my attention. I look forward to hearing a good result.



Best regards,

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Dear Sir: I would like to introduce myself as a candidate seeking admission to the Master of Business Administration in Hotel and Tourism Management program at Cesar Ritz Colleges, Switzerland. My name is *** and I am from Bangkok, Thailand. I believe I am a self-motivated and hard working individual capable of taking on challenging assignments.

  • Dear Sir: I would like to introduce myself as a candidate seeking admission to the Master of Business Administration in Hotel and Tourism Management program at Cesar Ritz Colleges, Switzerland.
  • My name is *** and I am from Bangkok, Thailand.
  • I believe I am a self-motivated and hard working individual capable of taking on challenging assignments.
  • I consistently look for opportunities to try new things and learn.
  • I have a Bachelor Degree in Business Administration with emphasis on Marketing from Kasem Bundit University.
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Dear Sir:

I would like to introduce myself as a candidate seeking admission to the Master of Business Administration in Hotel and Tourism Management program at Cesar Ritz Colleges, Switzerland. My name is *** and I am from Bangkok, Thailand. I believe I am a self-motivated and hard working individual capable of taking on challenging assi

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