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Social media limit the depth of human relations. Do you agree?
Owing to the problem which social media causes to the deep relationships between humans like distancing them. Some people think that social media limits the depth of human relations. I completely agree that social media decreases the interactions between individuals for several reasons.
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The first sentence is garbled. I cannot parse it, or make sense of it. It is a fragment.
- The first sentence is garbled.
- I cannot parse it, or make sense of it.
- It is a fragment.
- The phrase "social media" is repeated too many times.
- The phrase "for several reasons" is not very helpful or informative.
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The first sentence is garbled. I cannot parse it, or make sense of it. It is a fragment.
The phrase "social media" is repeated too many times.
The phrase "for several reasons" is not very helpful or informative. Use a word that summarizes the reasons.
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