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Anonymous Posted 15 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
Essay Homework - can i leave it that way?
Hi!
For school I have to write an essay about what i did last weekend.
I just wrote one but I'm not sure if i can leave it that way... Your opinions?
My last weekend
Last weekend was a very funny one. I've slept at a friend from Friday till Sunday. On friday we've planed to go to a friend whose parents weren't at home. As we got there we just drank some beer and talked about what we did the whole week. At 4 o' clock me and my friend went home and got some sleep. We woke up at half past 8 because his mother was shouting at his little sister. After we had breakfast we decided to go to the park for playing some soccer. So we called the same people who we met yesterday and then we played some soccer. After that we became very hungry and ordered a pizza at the local pizza restaurant. During the night there was a lan party at my friends house. We played the whole night until my parents were standing in front of my friends house asking if I'm there. I forgot to tell them that I'm sleeping there 2 nights. And now I've got some house arrest which means no essay for the next weekend because it would be a little bit boring.
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What do you think about it? I will get a mark for it which counts like a test.
I have to bring it on monday so I hope I'll get an answer of you soon
Thank for your time
For school I have to write an essay about what i did last weekend.
I just wrote one but I'm not sure if i can leave it that way... Your opinions?
My last weekend
Last weekend was a very funny one. I've slept at a friend from Friday till Sunday. On friday we've planed to go to a friend whose parents weren't at home. As we got there we just drank some beer and talked about what we did the whole week. At 4 o' clock me and my friend went home and got some sleep. We woke up at half past 8 because his mother was shouting at his little sister. After we had breakfast we decided to go to the park for playing some soccer. So we called the same people who we met yesterday and then we played some soccer. After that we became very hungry and ordered a pizza at the local pizza restaurant. During the night there was a lan party at my friends house. We played the whole night until my parents were standing in front of my friends house asking if I'm there. I forgot to tell them that I'm sleeping there 2 nights. And now I've got some house arrest which means no essay for the next weekend because it would be a little bit boring.
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What do you think about it? I will get a mark for it which counts like a test.
I have to bring it on monday so I hope I'll get an answer of you soon
Thank for your time
Top answer
Hi; An essay is usually five paragraphs or so, and you have only one paragraph. But that is OK, if that was your assignment. I have highlighted some words that need attention (incorrect grammar, spelling, or usage): Last weekend was a very funny one.
- Hi; An essay is usually five paragraphs or so, and you have only one paragraph.
- But that is OK, if that was your assignment.
- I have highlighted some words that need attention (incorrect grammar, spelling, or usage): Last weekend was a very funny one.
- I've slept at a friend from Friday till Sunday.
- On friday we 've planed to go to a friend whose parents weren't at home.
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Hi;
An essay is usually five paragraphs or so, and you have only one paragraph. But that is OK, if that was your assignment. I have highlighted some words that need attention (incorrect grammar, spelling, or usage):
Last weekend was a very funny one. I've slept at a friend from Friday till Sunday. On
An essay is usually five paragraphs or so, and you have only one paragraph. But that is OK, if that was your assignment. I have highlighted some words that need attention (incorrect grammar, spelling, or usage):
Last weekend was a very funny one. I've slept at a friend from Friday till Sunday. On
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