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Nowadays, e-mails and text messages have become a significant part of a human’s life. They are one of the best way to communicate quickly with other people. According to my knowledge, there is no evidence which attests to having an adverse impact on the quality of language.

Firstly, the benefits of the new technology are undeniable. From the viewpoint of the people who lived 20 years ago, they did not have an access to the high-speed communication. In the past, letters were the most frequent devices to communicate with family, and friends. The problems were the ordinary mails which usually got lost on the way, or took a good deal of time.
Moreover, the letters arrived at its destination and the information contained was outdated.

In connection with the rapid development of communications technology, text messages and emails have become important tools in order to communicate with people. Hence, letters have been replaced with e-mails and messages. What’s more, the reason of discussion about how e-mails and messages impact on the quality of language is caused by the language which is used by the majority of teenagers. This kind of language is often ungrammatical and unintelligible. Additionally, it seems to be vary considerably from the official language. For instance, “LOVE 2” for love you or “G9” for “good night”

In my opinion, it does not have an effect on the quality of the language used at schools or in public places. Young people are able to distinguish the style of language in the wide range of situations. And they are aware of situations in which the slang is unwelcome. Moreover, in days gone by, telegrams were also the short form of the message which contained just few words.

AlpheccaStars · Accepted Answer

I am not clear on what your thesis is. The benefits of new technology, particularly email?

Nowadays, e-mails and text messages have become a significant part of a human’s (only use "human" when you are comparing with another species, such as a dog.) life. They are one of the best way to communicate quickly with other people. According to my knowledge, (Are you a natural expert on the subject? Do you know a lot about it? ) there is no evidence which attests to having an adverse impact on the quality of language.

Firstly, the benefits of the new technology are undeniable. From the viewpoint of the people who lived 20 years ago, they did not have an access to the high-speed communication. (Which one? Do you mean telegrams or telephone?) In the past, letters were the most frequent devices (Devices are tools that you use. It is not natural here. ) to communicate with family, and friends. The problems were the ordinary mails which usually (really? Mail was pretty reliable. ) got lost on the way, or took a good deal of time.
Moreover, the letters arrived at its destination and the information contained was outdated.

In connection with the rapid development of communications technology, text messages and emails have become important tools in order to communicate with people. Hence, letters have been replaced with e-mails and messages. What’s more, the reason of discussion about how e-mails and messages impact on the quality of language is caused (reason is caused by?) by the language which is used by the majority of teenagers. This kind of language is often ungrammatical and unintelligible. (If it's unintelligible, why do teens use it?) Additionally, it seems to be vary considerably from the official language. For instance, “LOVE 2” for love you or “G9” for “good night”

In my opinion, it does not have an effect on the quality of the language used at schools or in public places. Young people are able to distinguish the style of language in the wide range of situations. And they are aware of situations in which the slang is unwelcome. Moreover, in days gone by, telegrams were also the short form of the message which contained just few words.

Bartdebsky · Answer

The topic is "Are text messages or e-mails destroying the language?". Thank you for your corrections! Could you check another work? I know that it may be difficult to you, because you didn't read this article, but may I ask you for checking my grammar?

Thank you in advance

Dear Newspaper Office,

I am writing in response to the article which was published the previous week. Considering your point of view, I have to disagree with you having regard to how you depicted the drawbacks stemming from the invention of the telephone. To be honest, I reckon that the invention of the telephone contributed to discover mobile phones, and the Internet is a great invention in our times.

Firstly, in my opinion, the poor communication between people is not caused by new technology. The compelling reason is the lack of time. People do not have spare time to personal communication. Hence, the best solution is to communicate with people by using telephones or the Internet. Owing the fact, that writing letters may took overly time which we can give up for resting or doing time with family. It went out with the window.
Secondly, In my view, the our civilization benefits from the wide range of devices which are accessible for almost every human. There is a plethora of advantages thanks to mobile phones or the Internet. In a timely fashion, we possess access to various ways of contact.

In former times, in the case of being in a foreign country, the contact between members of family was drastically limited. There were situation in which people do not have contact between each other for a long period of time. Nowadays, the lack of devices such as mobile phones or the Internet seems to be even risky, in the world in which anything can happen.

In a bid to summarize my message above, I am affected toward the thesis that the invention of the mobiles phones has a large impact on the countless number of ways connected with communication with people.

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