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Emo chic Posted 14 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

Essay Help

I need some serious help with editing and making my essay flow better. Will someone please help?
  

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Hi, You usually have more chance of a reply if you keep your posts short. You could try posting the first paragraph or two. Clive

— Clive

  • Hi, You usually have more chance of a reply if you keep your posts short.
  • You could try posting the first paragraph or two.
  • Clive
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Hi,

You usually have more chance of a reply if you keep your posts short.

You could try posting the first paragraph or two.

Clive
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Germans said the reason for the racial violence was the November 7th shooting Paris of a German scholar by a Jewish-Pole student. Hitler used this action so he could gain violent revenge disgusted as a “spontaneous demonstration” (Kristallnacht). Hitler took all his anger out on the Jewish people. He took everything from them and degraded them to animals. They broke glass of Jewish shop
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Hi,

Please tell us the exact topic or question that your teacher gave you.

Or did he/she just say 'Write all you can about Kristallnacht'?

Clive
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I have all my info straight. I just need help with wording and placement of sentences. Oh, and the flow.
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Hi,

Sorry, I can't comment on flow and placement if I don't know exactly what the essay is about.

Perhaps someone else volunteer to help you.

Good luck,
Clive
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