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Rileyandersen Posted 10 years ago
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please help me to correct my essay. Is there any grammatical error?
"More recently, the city of Aleppo has just bombarded by the Assad regime. Many hospitals there have also been affected. Really depressing for me, seeing the nurses there moving the patients one by one to a safer place. Even newborns had to be moved from their incubators for their safety. It's pathetic.
I've also found a bunch of photographs showing the situation there after the bombing. Corpses sprawled everywhere. The innocent civilians, including children, walking around with a body full of blood. It was a heartbreaking situation.
All of those things makes me feel very grateful for this life. sometimes I like to complain about my life. Even about the smallest thing. In fact, out there, there are still many children with a body full of blood and eyes swollen with tears, sit calmly in the refugee camps. He only thinking about one thing ... "When is all this going to end?"
"More recently, the city of Aleppo has just bombarded by the Assad regime. Many hospitals there have also been affected. Really depressing for me, seeing the nurses there moving the patients one by one to a safer place. Even newborns had to be moved from their incubators for their safety. It's pathetic.
I've also found a bunch of photographs showing the situation there after the bombing. Corpses sprawled everywhere. The innocent civilians, including children, walking around with a body full of blood. It was a heartbreaking situation.
All of those things makes me feel very grateful for this life. sometimes I like to complain about my life. Even about the smallest thing. In fact, out there, there are still many children with a body full of blood and eyes swollen with tears, sit calmly in the refugee camps. He only thinking about one thing ... "When is all this going to end?"
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More recently, the city of Aleppo has just been bombarded by the Assad regime. Many hospitals there have also been affected. That was re ally depressing for me, seeing the nurses there moving the patients one by one to a safer place.
- More recently, the city of Aleppo has just been bombarded by the Assad regime.
- Many hospitals there have also been affected.
- That was re ally depressing for me, seeing the nurses there moving the patients one by one to a safer place.
- Even newborns had to be moved from their incubators for their safety.
- It's pathetic.
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More recently, the city of Aleppo has just been bombarded by the Assad regime. Many hospitals there have also been affected. That was really depressing for me, seeing the nurses there moving the patients one by one to a safer place. Even newborns had to be moved from their incubators for their safety. It's pathetic.
I've also found a bunch of photographs showing
I've also found a bunch of photographs showing
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