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0 I was hoping i could get a revision of my conclusion paragraph. My professor says i need to write specifically.02br
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00Currently as a senior in high school, I have become more adaptive to integrating all three personas into my complicated life. I am very busy and mus make quick, effective decisions. The reserved quality of my nature still holds true. I am afraid to speak out at times for fear of stating the obvious or getting into an arguement. Although this holds true, I like this quality. I have learned to work around my shy, awkward self and still be social. Now that I have friends who understand and support my actions in life, I have learned to be social despite my shyness and awkwardness. The open mind I developed has become even more advanced. I can decide whether science or religion are more plausible or even describe how one introduced the other. The atheism I felt after the accident has dwindled away. I believe in god although science can conflict with any view of religion. This means I can look to evolution as God's way of signaling to cells that change is needed. The explanations of science can occur to me more as God's test of faith in humans. God and science both influence me, but nowadays, the two can explain each other if they need to.0-