Please do not put the essay instructions in the "Subject" line. Put it with your answer in the message body. Subject: Please review my IELTS essay Message body: Topic: DISCUSS ADVANTAGES AND DISADVANTAGES OF WORKING FROM HOME.
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Please do not put the essay instructions in the "Subject" line.
Put it with your answer in the message body.
Subject: Please review my IELTS essay
Message body:
Topic: DISCUSS ADVANTAGES AND DISADVANTAGES OF WORKING FROM HOME. Put all the essay instructions here.
My essay:
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Nowadays, there is a rising trend of phenomenon that more and more people choosing to telecommute, especially young graduates. This essay will discuss the pros and cons of this recent trend with relevant examples and support.
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