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Maryjane30 Posted 15 years ago
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A scary, tiny monster lives under my bed! he has been living under my bed for two days now. He lurks around my room, only at night. I can smell hem when I am trying to sleep. He has some serious body odor! He doesn't look the greatest either.
He is only two feet tall, but he's scary and vicious. He looks like an ant with his big bug eyes and his six legs. Even though he is only two feet tall he weighs a solid three hundred pounds. He loves to eat toe nails with raw fish. Do you think that's scary?
He loves to play pranks on me when I am at school. I never know what t he is going to do. I want to meet my creepy, sneaky monster that lives under my bed. I know that if I were a monster I would live in the woods.
I don't know if he has any friends or family members. Whoa! He does have relatives and they are running toward me. AHHHHHHHH! There's that monster from under my bed!
That's just a couple of things about the monster that lives under my bed.
He is only two feet tall, but he's scary and vicious. He looks like an ant with his big bug eyes and his six legs. Even though he is only two feet tall he weighs a solid three hundred pounds. He loves to eat toe nails with raw fish. Do you think that's scary?
He loves to play pranks on me when I am at school. I never know what t he is going to do. I want to meet my creepy, sneaky monster that lives under my bed. I know that if I were a monster I would live in the woods.
I don't know if he has any friends or family members. Whoa! He does have relatives and they are running toward me. AHHHHHHHH! There's that monster from under my bed!
That's just a couple of things about the monster that lives under my bed.
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Hi, This is very good writing. Have you considered that he may think that you look like a monster? Clive A scary, tiny monster lives under my bed!
- Hi, This is very good writing.
- Have you considered that he may think that you look like a monster?
- Clive A scary, tiny monster lives under my bed!
- h e has been living under my bed for two days now.
- He lurks around my room, only at night.
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Hi,
This is very good writing.
Have you considered that he may think that you look like a monster?
This is very good writing.
Have you considered that he may think that you look like a monster?
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