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As people want to get attention from people, there are many ways. Some people make a tattoo on their body, build up their body, or make the body slim. When they’re dieting, some people choose a way to eat disorder and throw up what they eat.

People get attention by an appearance mostly on the face or body that how much they are pretty or thin. People get obsessed with their weights when some fear that they won’t get any attention after they are not thin any more or some wants to diet but does not happen to be done easily. The idea where the eating disorder came from are getting common to people who desires so much to loose their weights.

Rather than choosing they way to loose their weights by eating disorder, they should give a try to themselves to eat healthy and exercise. They should not try to be same as other people who are models or thin.





Anorexia is the commonly known for eating disorder. Most people with this disease are girls, but guys have eating disorder too because of body training. Usually this starts by a girl dieting at first she might skip one meal thinking it’s not problem, but as the girl skips every meal her body rejects food, although this happens in a long period of time, it is common. Another way is a girl trying to throw up so she loses weight in a short period of time. A big factor that causes eating disorders is the media. The models are not allowed to have any junk food nor food that will make them gain weight because they need to be on magazines which everyone sees. Eating disorders are treated mentally and physically, and it could kill people easily.

To solve this problem people need to think that being skinny is not being perfect.