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My Childhood Home
I love my childhood home, for it was a beautiful big house. There was a large yard outside where I enjoyed my time playing football with my brother and riding my amazing red bicycle. On the first floor, there was my brother's wonderful room. Across my brother's room there was a big American kitchen that my mother cooked delicious dishes in it. On the second floor, there was my parents' room. Next to my parents' room there was an awesome large pink living room where my family where gathered. It had a warm atmosphere. Across the living room there was a big glass window. The glittering sunlight passed through the glassy window. There was a dining room next to the living room. In the dining room there was a big gold glassy dining table. Around the dining table there were five comfortable chairs. Near the dining room there was my favorite room which was the games room. I prefer the games room, for it had a lot of unforgettable memories. We did not hate to stay at home, nor did we feel bored in it. The home was full comfort for me and my family. I really love my childhood home, and I wish I could return to it.