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Zyzooh Posted 13 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
Essay correction
Hi ,
This is an essay , it has three paragraphs , I want you to correct the mistakes (if there is any)
Best Friend Ever
The life becomes wonderful with good people in it. I have many good friend in my life , although Ali is the best one . I have known Ali for very long time . Ali and I spent lot of times together . I know almost everything about him , and he knows everything about me as well. My family and his are very close , too .
Ali is 20 years old. He is a student at Al-Qassim University. He is good and intelligent student and always get high score. Reading is the most important thing in his life, He reads a lot of book. Even When I want to buy a new book , I always go to Ali and ask him about the book. If you see Ali , you would not expect that he is 20 years old ! he looks younger than he really is. He also like travelling , playing football , watching TV and politic.
Whenever I feel sad , I talk to Ali. Speaking with him about my troubles makes me feel comfortable. I will try to keep our friendship as long as I can and I always pray not to lose him. Nothing better than having a good friend around you.
This is an essay , it has three paragraphs , I want you to correct the mistakes (if there is any)
Best Friend Ever
The life becomes wonderful with good people in it. I have many good friend in my life , although Ali is the best one . I have known Ali for very long time . Ali and I spent lot of times together . I know almost everything about him , and he knows everything about me as well. My family and his are very close , too .
Ali is 20 years old. He is a student at Al-Qassim University. He is good and intelligent student and always get high score. Reading is the most important thing in his life, He reads a lot of book. Even When I want to buy a new book , I always go to Ali and ask him about the book. If you see Ali , you would not expect that he is 20 years old ! he looks younger than he really is. He also like travelling , playing football , watching TV and politic.
Whenever I feel sad , I talk to Ali. Speaking with him about my troubles makes me feel comfortable. I will try to keep our friendship as long as I can and I always pray not to lose him. Nothing better than having a good friend around you.
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Hi, zyzooh, welcome to the forum. I posted a reply to this question where you posted it anonymously yesterday,
I did not realize until now that you had registered and posted it again.
We ask that you post each question only once, as it leads to confusion and inconvenience for us if replies are not all on the same thread.
I did not realize until now that you had registered and posted it again.
We ask that you post each question only once, as it leads to confusion and inconvenience for us if replies are not all on the same thread.
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