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Anonymous Posted 13 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

Essay correction

Hi ,
This is an essay , it has three paragraphs , I want you to correct the mistakes (if there is any)

Best Friend Ever
The life become wonderful with good people in it. I have many good friend in my life , although Ali is the best one . I have known Ali for very long time . Ali and I spent lot of times together . I know almost everything about him , and he knows everything about me as well. My family and his are very close , too .
Ali is 20 years old. He is a student at Al-Qassim University. He is a good student and always has high score. Reading is the most important thing in Ali's life. He reads a lot. When I want to buy a new book , I always go to Ali and ask him about the book. If you see Ali , you would not expect that he is 20 years old ! he looks younger than he is. He also like travelling , playing football , watching TV and politic.
Whenever I feel sad , I talk to Ali. Speaking with him about my trebles makes me feel comfortable. I will try to keep our friendship as long as I can. I always pray not to lose him. Nothing better than having a good friend around you.

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) This is an essay , it has three paragraphs , I want you to correct the mistakes (if there is are any) The Best Friend Ever . The Life become s wonderful with good people in it. I have many good friend s in my life , although Ali is the best one .

  • ) This is an essay , it has three paragraphs , I want you to correct the mistakes (if there is are any) The Best Friend Ever .
  • The Life become s wonderful with good people in it.
  • I have many good friend s in my life , although Ali is the best one .
  • I have known Ali for very long time .
  • Ali and I spent lot of times together (if you still spend time with Ali, say either Ali and I spend a lot of time (no "s") together.
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Hi, (punctuation comes immediately after the word, no space.)
This is an essay, it has three paragraphs, I want you to correct the mistakes (if there is are any)

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