Essay correction

Though there are many ESL teachers in Chinese now, a lot of Chinese students have not this kind of opportunity to learn from native English speakers, especially in the poor area. I am working on a free online English study forum, hope may help more Chinese students.

http://bbs.sinolia.com
Could you help to correct some essays written by Chinese students in your spare time?Thanks a lot.
Here is the original writting:
Say no to pirated products
With the ever-faster paces of intellectual globalization, the phenomenon of piracy has unavoidably become a tough problem to socialists and economists. Piracy, this shameful and dishonest activity, can be seen in almost every corner in our international community, especially in our motherland-China. For instance, pirated books that have no copyright are everywhere, pirated CD appears more preferable for individuals to buy, and so forth.
As we all know, most characters, if not all, are appealing to pirated products and even don't pay attention to the original ones.

Why this distressingly thing happen? Someone may assume that pirated products are really much cheaper and some certain original products are prohibitively expensive to us college students who are not financially independent. The answer doesn't work. From my own perspective, he who buys pirated products is absolutely shortsighted. Why do I say so? In the long run, original products can be used for several years but in the opposite, pirated may die right after you bought it. Which is more desirable? And in the other hand, buying pirated things has definitely infringed others'copyright which can be acknowledges as stealing.

Consequently, I harbor a sincere hope that we Chinese should take this issue seriously and say no to the pirated products!

Best regards
Tony