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its an argumentative essay on living in the countryside or town. this is amna

Everyone has their own preferences of the places they would like to live in. However some are fortunate to get the opportunity to live in the preferred places. people look a their positive side while choosing where to live. I would not say that living in the countryside is terrible but I would rather prefer living in the town. I lay down the following reasons to justify my positions.

First of all to start by saying that town encourage us to improve social skills. Meeting new people everyday does give us an ability to interact confidently. There are exciting every now and then which keeps us engaged with work. However some people believe that some people think that living in the towns may spoil the future of there children, nevertheless I still firmly believe that it shows a glimpse of a brighter future.

In addition, my second point is that it is easier to get around in a town rather than in a countryside. A lot of residential buildings and supermarkets around makes it really easy for the residents to purchase their basic needs. The huge advantage for families is that a lot of public parks and mall have been built which becomes a good pass time for people. On the other hand some say that towns are congested but I find it quite interesting.

My last and final point is that there are always new events all the time. These events include festivals, new projects or inventions. In fact there are a lot of events that are awaiting us on the school calender as well. Everyday i wake up having one question in mind, "Whats new in school?" or "Whats new in the city?" . Upcoming festivals and projects are always the juicy gossip of the day. Even though we may hear people saying, "Oh! that's everyday, what's new in that?". Yes! Everything is new and unique.

Drawing to a conclusion, I believe that everyone has their own view, some are comfortable in towns where as some are in the countryside. I prefer town and I have a strong thought that town are where you can lead a happy and successful life.

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