Essay - check it please

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing with reference to express my interest and motivation in taking your
class, as advertised in this month's of „ Time Magazine“ with title “Around the
World language Centre”. I hold a strong belief that the Intermediate French
course is tailored to my needs.

I am currently a 22-year-old student at the University of Cambridge. I have been
studying French by myself for two years. Thus, in my point of view, my French
has been improved considerably. However, I lack the ability to communicate
effectively with native speakers. As far as I am concerned, intermediate level is
indeed appropriate for me.

Could you possibly send me information about what day and time the class is
and how much it costs?

I firmly hope that you will take the matters into account and this course will help
me gain the necessary skills and experience for my own.

I would like to express my gratitude to you for informing me.

I look forward to receiving your prompt.

Your faithfully,

Jane Tran