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Everyone of us took, or is still taking part in education process. However, not many people are aware of its differences in various countries. In this article, I am going to describe the most significant of them.

Schooling in Poland is currently being changed. Polish authority has decided to liquidate three-year middle schools. They will be replaced with longer primary and secondary schools, which used to take, respectively, six and three years. After the reform, children will start education at the age of seven. They will firstly attend eight-year primary school. After graduation, they will have to choose their next school. They can choose between secondary, trade and vocational school. Only one thing will not change - students are obligated to attend school until they are eighteen. They can continue their education by studies.

Children in England start their education at the age of five. Firstly, they attend infant schools which educate children aged between five and seven. Another stage of children’s education is junior school. It is a type of school which provides primary education to children, often in the age range seven to eleven, following attendance at Infant school. After graduation, they start attending secondary schools which teach children aged between eleven and sixteen. After 2 years, students write SAT exams. At the age of sixteen, they write GSCE exams which end the mandatory education in England. Nevertheless, some students decide to continue their education in college, and later at a university.

Education in Australia comprises primary education, followed by secondary education and tertiary education. Attending school in Australia is compulsory between certain ages as specified by state or territory legislation. Depending on the state or territory, and date of birth of the child, school is compulsory from the age of five to six to the age of fifteen to seventeen. Children usually start education at the age of five or six. They firstly attend primary schools. Education in Australia is compulsory until the age of fifteen or seventeen (depending on the state). As opposed to England or Poland, private and catholic schools take very serious part in Australian schooling. They educate about 40% of Australian students. After graduating from secondary school, they can continue their education at universities or in technical colleges.

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ManiasChildren in England start their education at the age of five.

Ages 4 to 5 in https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Reception_(school)

ManiasFirstly, they attend infant schools which educate children aged between five and seven. Another stage of children’s education is junior school. It is a type of school which provides primary education to children, often in the age range seven to eleven, following attendance at Infant school.

The terms "infant school" and "junior school" don't really mean different kinds of school. They are old fashioned terms for different years within primary schools https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Primary_school Children attend them from reception until year 6 and age 11.

ManiasAfter graduation,

That word is not used in education before university level, in the UK. You could write after leaving primary school, instead.

ManiasAfter 2 years, students write SAT exams. At the age of sixteen, they write GSCE exams

One of the words take, sit or do would be more natural choices than "write".

ManiasAt the age of sixteen, they write GSCE exams which end the mandatory education in England.

It is the end of school but not education, which is compulsory until age 18. See https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Education_in_England

AlpheccaStars · Answer

Everyone of us took, or is still taking part in (missing word) education process. However, not many people are aware of its differences in various countries. In this article, I am going to describe the most significant of them.

Schooling in Poland is currently being changed. (missing word) Polish authority has decided to liquidate three-year middle schools. They will be replaced with longer primary and secondary schools, which used to take, respectively, six and three years. After the reform, children will start education at the age of seven. They will firstly attend (missing word) eight-year primary school. After graduation, they will have to choose their next school. They can choose between secondary, trade or ~~and~~ vocational school. Only one thing will not change - students are obligated to attend school until they are eighteen. They can continue their education by studies (??).

Children in England start their education at the age of five. Firstly, they attend infant schools which educate children ~~aged~~ between the ages of five and seven. Another stage of children’s education is junior school. It is a type of school which provides primary education to children, often in the age range from seven to eleven, following attendance at Infant school. After graduation, they start attending secondary schools which teach children aged between eleven and sixteen. After 2 years, students write SAT exams. At the age of sixteen, they write GSCE exams which end the mandatory education in England. Nevertheless, some students decide to continue their education in college, and later at a university.

Education in Australia comprises primary education, followed by secondary education and tertiary education. Attending school in Australia is compulsory between certain ages as specified by (missing word) state or territory legislation. Depending on the state or territory, and (missing word) date of birth of the child, school is compulsory from the age of five to six to the age of fifteen to seventeen. Children usually start education at the age of five or six. They firstly attend primary schools. Education in Australia is compulsory until the age of fifteen or seventeen (depending on the state). As opposed to England or Poland, private and catholic schools take (missing word) very serious part in Australian schooling. They educate about 40% of Australian students. After graduating from secondary school, they can continue their education at universities or in technical colleges.

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