Essay Agree or disagree: Young people enjoy more life than older people do.

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Essay topic- Agree or disagree: Young people enjoy more life than older people do.

Essay:
In my opinion, to enjoy life age should not be a barrier, young or old does not matter. Everyone has their own way of enjoying life.
Young people have lot of energy and money to spend but they are usually short of time with their busy schedule of office, work, family and building their career.
On the other hand, older people although they are little short of energy but they have lot of time and life experiences to understand the value of even the most simplest things in life.

Most of the older people are retired from work and they prefer to spend their time on things which they enjoy. They utilize their time by spending on the things they like, hobbies they were longing for since young age, spending time with their friends, family, and their grand-children. For instance, my grand-father was very busy in his young age as he has too look after his business, had to attend lot of business meetings. He had very little time to spend to go out on vacations or to spend with family. But after retirement, he used to to spend most of his time with his friends playing golf, exploring new places and spend time with family.While on the other hand younger people are busy with their work life which is getting very stressful in this competitive world. So, young individuals do not get much time to spend on stress free vacations or with family.

Senior citizens seems to enjoy simpler things so much easier than young people do. Older people enjoy just sitting with their friends and having a cup of coffee. They just seem to appreciate being alive and being able to see the people they are. On the other hand, young people do not truly appreciate what they have till they experience some hardships in their lives.

In conclusion, older people enjoy life with more spirit and happiness as compared to younger people.