Essay about graduate's tendency toward learning.

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Topic: Many young people who leave school hold a negative attitude towards learning. Why does this happen? What are the solutions?

Many young people have a tendency to show less interest in learning after leaving school. There are some factors leading to it, and effective measures should be produced to deal with these problems.

To begin with, there are many reasons why young people tend to be less interesting in learning after graduating from school. First of all, teenagers who reach the age of eighteen normally realize the responsibility of taking care of their families. As a result, they form an idea of making money constantly instead of studying. Secondly, many young people admit that teenage is a proper period to go out and experience the world. They claimed that studying is boring and yet probably will not have any benefit for their future career. Alternatively, they can utilize their time on travelling around the world which is stimulating and enjoyable.

However, some feasible solutions could be tackled these aforementioned issues. The first solution is that parents should pay more attention to their sons/daughters in order to guide them to make an appropriate decision. For example, whenever high school graduated come up with ideas that they prefer to work rather than continuing going to college, their parents should consider either agree with them or encourage them to advance their study due to their ability and knowledge. Furthermore, if parents want their sons/daughters keep learning things after school, they should only provide enough money for their offsprings and give them advice indeed. This lead to the fact that young people might not afford to go travelling and thus they would focus studying or learning skills.

In conclusion, school leavers tend to have a negative attitude towards learning because of some reasons, and solutions should be produced soon to tackle this issue.

This topic is kind of tough to me and I really struggled to write it. I am not sure that some of the ideas are accurate or words are appropriate. Can you check my work and correct it?

Thank you so much for your help.

AlpheccaStars · Accepted Answer

Many young people have a tendency to show less interest in learning (The topic statement was much stronger than that.) after leaving school. There are some factors leading to it, and effective measures should be produced (taken) to deal with these problems.

To begin with, there are many reasons why young people tend to b

To begin with, there are many reasons why young people tend to be less interesting (wrong form) in learning after graduating (The topic includes student who leave school before graduation. I interpret the topic as pertaining more to the drop-outs than to the graduates.) from school. First of all, teenagers who reach the age of eighteen normally realize the responsibility of taking care of their families. As a result, they form an idea of making money ~~constantly~~ instead of studying. Secondly, many young people admit that teenage (wrong word) is a proper period to go out and experience the world. They claimed that studying is boring and ~~yet~~ probably will not have any benefit for their future career. Alternatively, they can utilize their time on travelling around the world which is stimulating and enjoyable.

However, some feasible solutions could be tackled these aforementioned issues. The first solution is that parents should pay more attention to their sons/daughters in order to guide them to make an appropriate decision. For example, whenever high school graduated (wrong form) come up with ideas that they prefer to work rather than continuing (wrong form) going to college, their parents should consider either agree with them or encourage them to advance their study due to their ability and knowledge. Furthermore, if parents want their sons/daughters (missing word) keep learning things after school, they should only provide enough money for their offsprings (wrong word) and give them advice indeed. This lead to the fact that young people might not (missing words) afford to go travelling and thus they would focus (missing word) studying or learning skills.

In conclusion, school leavers tend to have a negative attitude towards learning ~~because of some reasons~~, and solutions should be produced soon to tackle this issue.

I don't think that you answered the question in your essay.

Here are a lot reasons for negative attitudes towards school and learning. You can write an essay about these reasons, or similar ones from your experience.

1. School is very competitive and students are punished for not being at the top of the class. Students who are of an average or lower intelligence can get very discouraged because they cannot compete, no matter how hard they try. Parents scold their kids if they get a bad grade.
2. Some school subjects are very boring, yet students are forced to study these required subjects.
3. Some teachers are unfair, and treat their "favorite" students better than others. The other kids resent this. Some teachers are too harsh and give unrealistic punishments for minor misbehavior.
4. Some teachers teach in a very boring manner. The children hate to go to their classes.
5. Some students are bullied by other students in school, and the bullies are not punished. They dread going to school every day.
6. The school environment can be bad. Dirty, ugly and old schools with no modern technology do not inspire the students.
7. The rules for school can be very restrictive. Young people might feel like they are in a prison, not in an exciting learning environment.
8. The school days can be very long and tiring. Then, when they go home, students have hours of homework to do. They don't have enough time for leisure activities. They might be sleep-deprived or sick from the stress..
9. The parents and family can be suffering because they have to pay high school fees. A child will feel guilty because he feels that it is his fault that the family is suffering, especially if he does not do well.
10. If a child has an older brother or sister who is a star and champion in school, they might feel very bad because they cannot equal their sibling in performance. The parents will praise one child and punish the other. The less-capable student will develop a very negative attitude towards school and learning.

The situation can be so bad that the child will refuse to go to school. They hate school and learning so much that they drop out and run away.

Anonymous · Answer

ThelokyTopic: Many young people who leave school hold a negative attitude towards learning. Why does this happen?

Another reason is that in some parts of the world many teachers and aspects of school systems are not fit for purpose and therefore fail to provide an adequate education.

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