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Abu2880 Posted 7 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

ESSAY about Brexit( is there anyone who would like to check it for me, pleease:)

Since Britain left the EU, there have been major debates on whether or not it was the right decision. In my essay I will discuss some of the arguments the Leavers and the Remainers present in the general Brexit debate in Britain


June 23th was the day where Britain held a Referendum concerning if Britain should leave or not. The polls ended with 51% voted in favor and 49% voted against. The reason why England agreed to a referendum was because David Cameron, who was prime minister there, thought there was no control over the immigrants. It wasn't because he hated the immigrants, but he was just annoyed that there was no more control over it. He was tired of there were no control over the situation in that time. Therefore, he chose to make a referendum.


The leavers want to reclaim their borders and choose their own immigration policy. They think it will stop, if they could control it themselves.


A huge group of the neo-liberal British believe that Britain could do better by leaving EU. Many business leader and company’s in Britain, doesn’t think it’s a good idea to leave EU, because it will just cost them extra and more rules will come, and it would just affect their company’s. If they leave the EU will their value fall-out. They would only make a deal if it’s benefits them


The remainer doesn’t want to be the first country to leaves the EU. They will not be seen as the country that leaves the EU, without a deal. They will be seen as the country that saved the Europa back in time in two world wars. They don’t believe that leaving EU will stop immigration to the UK. It will an economic disaster if they leave. Leaving EU could mean loss of thousands of jobs. EU has helped whit their economy, their wealth and status on the world rang since they joined in 1976. Remaining in the EU is a huge benefit to England, because of the free movement. Many of the firms could not survive if they could not get employees from other countries in EU. If they leave, all that would change.



I would like to compare Helen from "the end" with Stephen Bray from horizon, which is a broadcast we saw in the class. I think they have a lot of common opinions. Both see it as a good opportunity to stay in the EU. They feel let down and sad that the government and fellow citizens have made a decision. Helen and Stephen have same topic and theme in focus.



Conclusion


I can conclude that it’s bad for Britain to leave the EU, they would lose a massive amount of cooperation from other countries in EU, as well they are damaging their own economy and it would be a huge disaster for them. What would be best for them to be remembered for. Those who just walked away and left the cooperation with the EU or those who were reliable and being the nation that saved Europa back in time. The Britain is stronger in Europe than outside Europe. Britain is one of the largest nations in Europe. They will lose this influential position if they leave the EU. It will be a huge struggle for them to leave the EU, but if they stay, it’s a huge benefit for them. Of course, everybody got a different opinion to the situation, but they need to come with an agreement, otherwise the country will be divided. They need to stay together, it’s are this best for them” Together are we stronger” as you say.

  

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TOOPBOYS:

"Since Britain left the EU,"

Britain has not left yet: the exit is currently set down for October 31st 2019.

TOOPBOYa Referendum concerning if Britain should leave or not

a referendum as to whether Britain ...

TOOPBOYThe polls ended with 51% voted in favor and 49% voted against.
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TOOPBOYHe was tired of there were no control

Better grammar: He was tired of there being no control ...

Better still: He was tired of the lack of control over ....

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Since Britain left the EU, (That is not a true statement. The leaving date is in the future.) there have been major debates on whether or not it was the right decision. In my essay I will discuss some of the arguments the Leavers (Who are

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